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Incredific idea: Inhuman by ~Crispy-Gypsy:iconCrispy-Gypsy:


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Pretty weird concept, I guess; I don't know if anyone thought of anything like it, but it popped into my head while musing over Syndrome (which is a lot of the time).

Well, what happens in the story is that when the Supers came back, there's a group of people who really hate them. The Anti Super Association (WAS going to be Anti-super society, but that would make their acronym ASS, and as funny as that is, it wouldn't fit *laughs*). Well, they're gaining more power, and even though the supers are told not to worry, everyone is always afraid of encountering them. After a while, supers begin disappearing again, and though Mr. Incredible is quick to blame Syndrome, who survived and had rebuilt his empire after convincing the courts that he was crazy at the time of his murders, the rest of the world is convinced that it's ASA radicals.

After Violet gets kidnapped, she finds out that it's actually both of them working together. You'll find out, if I ever decide to write it.

ANYWAY, the pictures are showing how I portrayed Syndrome in my mind. Basically, things weren't easy for him after the accident. He totally lost a lot and went cyborg; after all that's happened to him, I suspected a lot of bodily damage, really. Yes, I designed the robot arm. I am no good at that stuff. He lost an arm and an eye, and he has a lot of nerve damage that both puts him in pain and cuts him off from feeling. It's really weird and sad and creepy at once.

The stasis chamber is something that Syndrome uses now to keep the Supers from attacking. It's sort of like an induced coma. There's a bit in the story that the girl supers are sort of being forced into rape because of a chemical that some guards put into the liquid that induces... well, I'll stop talking. It's really twisted stuff, I guess. *laughs*

ANYWAY, I might write it someday. It's really interesting me.

Incredibles (c) Disney, Pixar

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:icondevilishkurumi:
I'd read it.

Damn you, you got me interested in Incredibles fic.

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GAHAHAHAHA! I'm happy. And horrible, I guess, but happy. *laughs*

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Hey, its kinda like Terminator, sorta not... lol. That's the only cyborg movie I can think of!

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:iconcrispy-gypsy:
*laughs* It's not really cyborgian to that extent. Basically, he's cyborg in that he's got mechanical pieces replacing his eye and arm and also because of some wiring he's had attaching his brain to several muscles in his face and into the mechanical arm so that he's able to control them subconsciously as if they were still attached to him... think more... Silver from Treasure Planet. Though, I don't think a lot of people watched that *laughs*. Um... maybe... Ed Elric from Full Metal Alchemist. Except Syndrome's more F***ed up because of it. Cuz, guess who he blames for it all? *laughs*

Gah, i think that if I do write it, it'll be one of the more darker and more perverted ideas I've had... *laughs* The majority of it, Violet's half-naked, and there's this one scene that played out in my head.... GAH. I'll have to fix that and figure out how to tame it. *laughs* If I ever get to it.

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:iconkanjilearner3309:
Sounds like a very twisted Synlet to me.

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:icondevilishkurumi:
Hey, the best way of showing your love is to beat the everloving shit out of 'em.

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sounds pretty cool, i'd definately read itXD
the concepts are really cool as well. i like the one of Violet touching his face. for some reason it seems sweetXD

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It sounds like an uber-awesome idea. I fully endorse this fanfic's writage. :D

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:iconturkmen:
My brainhas just exploded :xD:
Great idea!

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